Hello John has asked me to post the comments that I made on the technical presentation of the extension dictionary during the COMCIFS review phase. Here they are: ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__phasing_MIR_der.power_acentric The meaning of the following phrase is not clear: "Phasing power is <FH / Lack_of_closure>." - what is FH? - what is Lack_of_closure? If a general descriptive phase, the underscores may be omitted (cf "Isomorphous difference" in save__phasing_MIR_der.R_cullis_acentric). If a single symbolic reference, it should be properly defined. - do the angle brackets have any meaning (e.g. "expectation value")? If not, should they be dropped altogether? Replaced by parentheses? Is the placement correct? (i.e. not <FH>/<Lack_of_closure>?) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__phasing_MIR_der.R_cullis_acentric Same comments as above regarding "Lack_of_closure" and angle brackets. The meaning of this sentence is not clear: "NB: This is tabulated for acentric and anomalous terms, extending the former definition." - what is the former definition? Presumably it is the equation sum| |Fph~obs~ +/- Fp~obs~| - Fh~calc~ | R~cullis~ = ---------------------------------------- sum|Fph~obs~ - Fp~obs~| given in save__phasing_MIR_der_shell.R_cullis, in which case reference should be made to the location of this definition. - is there a reference to the tabulation for acentric and anomalous terms? - should the literature reference to the paper of Cullis et al.: Ref: Cullis, A. F., Muirhead, H., Perutz, M. F., Rossmann, M. G. & North, A. C. T. (1961). Proc. R. Soc. A265, 15-38. appear in any case? - i.e. is the quantity still properly named as a "Cullis R factor"? Here is a suggested alternative definition: _item_description.description ; Residual factor R~cullis~ for acentric reflections in this derivative. The Cullis R factor is the ratio of the lack of closure and isomorphous difference terms. It is defined in terms of an analytical formula for centric reflections, but must be extracted or interpolated for acentric and anomalous reflections from the tabulation of XXXXX XXXXX XXXXX XXXX. Ref: Cullis, A. F., Muirhead, H., Perutz, M. F., Rossmann, M. G. & North, A. C. T. (1961). Proc. R. Soc. A265, 15-38. ; ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__phasing_MIR_der.R_cullis_anomalous The quantity is defined twice: "Cullis R factor is <Lack_of_closure>/<Isomorphous difference>." "Cullis Rfactor is <Lack_of_closure>/<Anomalous difference>" - have two definitions been conflated? I find the nomenclature confusing and not fully explained - what are FPHi(+) and FPHi(-)? What is FHi"? The various Dano terms? RC(ano) should be called something else - R~cullis~ or R~cullis~^ano^ perhaps? Small point - "Sum" in the equation should be "sum" for consistency with other such expressions. Is the Cullis et al. literature reference appropriate here too? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__phasing_MIR_shell.reflns_anomalous Doesn't exist - should it? (i.e. there are _centric and _acentric definitions, but no _anomalous.) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ REFLN_SYS_ABS Is not this entire category a candidate for the Core dictionary? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__refln_sys_abs.index_l Typo: "Miller index h of the reflection." should of course be "Miller index l of the reflection." ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__refine.overall_ESU_B "Overall estimated standard uncertainties" should be "Overall standard uncertainty". Presumably this is the quantity sigma_B (the equation gives (sigma_B)^2). ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__refine.overall_ESU_ML Seems identical to the sigma_B definition apart from the numerical factor (3/8 versus 8). Is this correct? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__refine.overall_ESU_R_Cruickshanks_DPI Better named as "_refine.overall_ESU_R_Cruickshank_DPI" (i.e. without the s at the end of Cruickshank)? What does DPI stand for? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__refine.overall_ESU_Rfree better named as "_refine.overall_ESU_R_free" (i.e. with an _ after the R)? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__refine.overall_FOM_free_Rset better named as "_refine.overall_FOM_free_R_set" (i.e. with an _ after the R)? _item.name is incorrectly given as '_refine.overall_FOM_work_Rset' (and likewise _item_aliases.alias_name as '_refine.ebi_overall_FOM_work_Rset'). ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__refine.overall_FOM_work_Rset better named as "_refine.overall_FOM_work_R_set" (i.e. with an _ after the R)? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__refine_analyze.RG_d_res_high refers to "__refine_analyze.ls_RG_free" - typo? Also in save__refine_analyze.RG_d_res_low. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__refine_analyze.RG_work_free_ratio would be better as "_refine_analyze.RG_free_work_ratio" (to match the definition as the free/work ratio). ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__refine_funct_minimized.numterms would be better as "save__refine_funct_minimized.number_terms" ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__refine_ls_restr.type The new RESTRAIN labels are verbose - not necessarily a problem, though there may be an implication to a casual user that any old sentence or phrase could go in here. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ save__refine_ls_restr.U_sigma_wghts Should we go for the extra two letters of .U_sigma_weights for clarity? "The expected r.m.s. differences in thermal parameter, either Uiso or Uaniso, are listed for each shell in _refine_ls_restr.ebi_rmsdev_dictionary." - _refine_ls_restr.ebi_rmsdev_dictionary is not defined in this batch of data names - is it a generally useful data name or does it have application only to the RESTRAIN program? - the same question might indeed be asked of the .U_sigma_weights data name itself. - the .ebi_rmsdev_dictionary refers presumably to a tabulation of values that are to be regarded as a set of standards characterising the particular structure under investigation. This use of the term "dictionary" (also used elsewhere in protein structural science for standard tabulations, if I am not mistaken) is unfortunate within the nomenclature of CIF and its associated data dictionaries. Is there a suitable synonym acceptable to the macromolecular community? "...in both cases, WU is the value stored in _refine_ls_restr.U_sigma_wghts." - _refine_ls_restr.U_sigma_wghts (or _weights) is not defined: is this a typo for _refine_ls_restr_type.U_sigma_wghts? Likewise the definition begins with a reference to refine_ls_restr.ebi_U_sigma_wghts - should this be _refine_ls_restr_type.ebi_U_sigma_wghts (note also the missing initial underscore)? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Regards Brian _______________________________________________________________________________ Brian McMahon tel: +44 1244 342878 Research and Development Officer fax: +44 1244 314888 International Union of Crystallography e-mail: bm@iucr.ac.uk 5 Abbey Square, Chester CH1 2HU, England bm@iucr.org (Coordinating Secretary, COMCIFS)